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What is this feeling I have inside?
It’s a feeling for you.
How can I feel when I’m so far away?
Wish I knew the answers, but I don’t

I want to look into your eyes
I want to understand
So I can say I did
You’re so beautiful to me, and so wonderful

How can I fall for you when I’m so far away?
Wish I knew the answers but I don’t
I sing this song for you, not just for anyone
I sing it for you and no one
I sing it for you and no one else.

I can’t lie to myself anymore
I want to be able to look into your eyes
I want to be able to understand you

How can I feel for you, how can I not.. You’re so wonderful
I want to look into your eyes, so I can say I did
I sing this song for you, not just for anyone
I sing it for you and no one else.

They just don’t understand
You’re a dream I don’t want to end
You’re a dream..I don’t want to end
This is one of my first songs I ever wrote, I still like and I'm gonna make some modifications to it later. Some older memories, I just wanted to post on here so I wont lose it again. I'll post the song later on after I record, gonna play it on my 12-string.
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silentange101 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
W.O.W. i read this and was like "awwwwwwww a cute love song, whos it for??" read ur comment n realized its old. still, so this musta been ur first time love song almost huh? i like how u wrote it in a way that ur questioning love n at the same time answering it urself. the person who replied its an experience everyone goes thru can understand is right. i know wat ur talking about. just two things im curious about.
1. is this the same title from wen u wrote it originally?
2. "They just don’t understand
You’re a dream I don’t want to end
You’re a dream..I don’t want to end"
i love this part!! i mean, the idea of a love being a dream u dont wanna end, i know wat u mean. its really good. it also wraps around ur title. by far, this is not my fav of urs BUT this little idea thrown in it n its cuteness makes me wanna take it home with me so i fav it =P nice one dustin, always be true in ur music ^^
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Rapt0r140 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007
hehe yeah =P
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youneverasked Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
You took a risk with this one.
Honesty is always at the risk of sounding overly sappy. It's tough to interest people who don't or haven't felt the same.
But this one works nicely. Or maybe it's that I've felt much the same. I really don't know.
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xXMissEskimoXx Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
woah *gobsmacked* that's so .... i'm speechless
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Rapt0r140 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
hehe thank you very much! its 3 year old song =P so yeah...I guess i've been playing for 3years =P
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xXMissEskimoXx Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
it's really good overwelmingly good i love it so much :love:
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Rapt0r140 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
Yeah it was made for someone but have gone so, I didn't want them to but what can you do lol
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xXMissEskimoXx Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
aaww :hug::worry: you're such a sweet person dustin don't ever change ok :cuddle:
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Rapt0r140 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
I woooont
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xXMissEskimoXx Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
hehehehe good :hug:
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